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She walked down the street looking lost and alone. A shimmering glow peeked through the grime where she’d wiped the tears from her cheeks. Her feet were bare, little trails of blood as though she’d been walking for days. Her golden hair lay limp across her shoulders. Filled with twigs and leaves.
Her dress was tattered. White with golden streaks hanging loosely down her back. I watch her stumble, grabbing out for something as an automatic reflex not out of any real sense for self preservation.
I reached out and caught her arm, catching her. She looked at me with tired, sad eyes that couldn’t quite focus upon my face. She was beautiful. Perfect. She tried to speak ‘I-I-‘ and gave up. I could hear her voice was as wonderful as her face. Dancing to my ears from her lips.
She caressed my cheek briefly before returning to the crowd. I followed her, chasing her as she tried to get away. No-one else seemed to notice her as she pushed past them on the busy sidewalk. Finally my fingers closed around her fragile arm and she turned to face me again.
‘Wait.. where are you going’
She looked confused, unable to answer.
‘Do you have a home?’
‘N-no’ she stuttered, her beautiful voice again filling my ears.
‘Where are you from?’
‘It-It doesn’t matter. It’s gone now.’
‘Gone? How can a place be gone?’
‘He closed it. He gave up. Said there was no point anymore. No-one was ever good enough. No-one had joined us for thousands of years ’
‘Who closed what? How can you close somewhere? Thousands of years?’
‘He’s God. He can do anything.’
‘Go—What? Do you mean Heaven?’
‘Heaven. Yes. That is what you call it here. God closed Heaven. Told us to come to earth and try to improve your kind‘
‘You can’t close Heaven! Where do we go when we die?’
‘The same place mankind has been going for the past few thousand years. Hell.’
Her dress was tattered. White with golden streaks hanging loosely down her back. I watch her stumble, grabbing out for something as an automatic reflex not out of any real sense for self preservation.
I reached out and caught her arm, catching her. She looked at me with tired, sad eyes that couldn’t quite focus upon my face. She was beautiful. Perfect. She tried to speak ‘I-I-‘ and gave up. I could hear her voice was as wonderful as her face. Dancing to my ears from her lips.
She caressed my cheek briefly before returning to the crowd. I followed her, chasing her as she tried to get away. No-one else seemed to notice her as she pushed past them on the busy sidewalk. Finally my fingers closed around her fragile arm and she turned to face me again.
‘Wait.. where are you going’
She looked confused, unable to answer.
‘Do you have a home?’
‘N-no’ she stuttered, her beautiful voice again filling my ears.
‘Where are you from?’
‘It-It doesn’t matter. It’s gone now.’
‘Gone? How can a place be gone?’
‘He closed it. He gave up. Said there was no point anymore. No-one was ever good enough. No-one had joined us for thousands of years ’
‘Who closed what? How can you close somewhere? Thousands of years?’
‘He’s God. He can do anything.’
‘Go—What? Do you mean Heaven?’
‘Heaven. Yes. That is what you call it here. God closed Heaven. Told us to come to earth and try to improve your kind‘
‘You can’t close Heaven! Where do we go when we die?’
‘The same place mankind has been going for the past few thousand years. Hell.’
Literature
Letting Go
Letting Go
Something's wrong with her, you know.
She sits and stares unconscientiously out of her window
Down onto the streets below
She's giving up; she's letting go.
She's all alone, but doesn't care
Everyone loves her, but she seems so unaware
She's feeling so much pain, and her hurts so hard to bear.
Look at her swollen eyes, and look at her unkempt hair.
What makes her feel she has to die?
What brings her sorry eyes to cry?
She signs her letter with goodbye.
She really doesn't want to lie.
She'll miss her family and friends
But she'll be happy when it ends
With this deed, her sorry heart will mend.
Only on her blade will
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Can't you hear it?
Can't you hear it?
You were dead before the day had even begun,
but you never could have known it.
C r a c k
Broken
in seven places, they told me afterwards.
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There was a stale taste in the air
as we set out,
though at the time I wouldn't have taken any notice of it.
Those fresh leather seats seemed so…
inviting.
We both knew we were well above the limits:
all of them.
Too fast, too high and too intoxicated.
And somewhere along the way,
time stopped.
For a fleeting moment there was sile
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Did you not understand
Revenge is for the weak
Lucky for you im fragile
Justice is all I seek
Seeing you sad will do me for the while
You never cared about me
Or any of my friends
Its about time that you see
That this must be the end
Your lies
Don't work on me anymore
Your eyes
The things I use to adore
What now
Did you not understand?
I don't want to take your hand
Denial is for the blind
Lucky for you I took your eyes
I left my feelings for you behind
I guess its not big surprise
You never cared about me
Or any of my friends
Its about time that you see
That this must be the end
Your lies
Don't work on me anymore
Your eyes
The things
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bah. it it a poor excuse for writing but meh. deal with it.
or help me improve it.
or help me improve it.
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I love how she feels so lost now...